09-16-2016, 09:11 AM
Ohhh~ Thank you! I will work on fixing it! I am currently reading through all of the comics, sketch and coloured, to get a better sense of it all! I was afraid the profile might not tie in well, so I would be open to help and suggestions on how to do so!
As far as berries and nuts, I am currently researching the flora native to Hawaii or other islands surrounding it.
As for how she'd hear about the overlord and lair, I... I don't know. I am typically very good at coming up with profiles, but with this one being so close to myself and my own background, I am stuck. But I really, really want to make her acceptable so I can become a part of this world through Prima. So, again, any help or suggestions would be gratefully accepted.
On a side note, I was thinking perhaps Me would be a good fit for Prima, considering she loves scavenging for food. (And because Fish is her mainstay food source, that is a plus.)
Hmm... On second thought... Perhaps rather than scavenging, she could gathers Blackberries, as I read that they are an invasive, non-native species of Hawaii and often need to be controlled. Though, I don't know if that would be too... Godmoddish or... rude to assume that there would be blackberries and that they'd also be invasive on the Islands.
As far as berries and nuts, I am currently researching the flora native to Hawaii or other islands surrounding it.
As for how she'd hear about the overlord and lair, I... I don't know. I am typically very good at coming up with profiles, but with this one being so close to myself and my own background, I am stuck. But I really, really want to make her acceptable so I can become a part of this world through Prima. So, again, any help or suggestions would be gratefully accepted.
On a side note, I was thinking perhaps Me would be a good fit for Prima, considering she loves scavenging for food. (And because Fish is her mainstay food source, that is a plus.)
Hmm... On second thought... Perhaps rather than scavenging, she could gathers Blackberries, as I read that they are an invasive, non-native species of Hawaii and often need to be controlled. Though, I don't know if that would be too... Godmoddish or... rude to assume that there would be blackberries and that they'd also be invasive on the Islands.