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If you ever have questions
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE when responding do NOT give me one-liners for boot-campers this will prolong your stay untill you can give me longer posts consistantly, for citadel graduates, it will harm your changes of gaining additional freedoms within the Rp. So make it awesome on yourself and me and give me at least a paragraph to read. Think of everything your character is doing to respond, little physical actions beyond a simple spoken response can really help give people more material to work with.

Example of what not to do:

Post 1: Fox turned to Bane. "And just what is that supposed to mean?"

Post 2: Bane shrugged. "Just a minor observation."

How to fix it:

Post 1: Fox tensed, her ears flattening as she turned to her dire, brows raising in light irritation at the beast she often saw as a sister. Her claws drummed against her desk and her mouth parted slowly, favoring one side to show the canines of her teeth in a small but unmistakable snarl. "And just what is that supposed to mean?" she grumbled, clearly grumpy at the Dire's implication. Her claws continued to drum against the desk but now at a slightly increased rate.

Post 2: Bane smiled and lifted her shoulders in a passive shrug. She turned her head to the side, looking at her Host with one eye. She seemed to enjoy getting a rise out of her "sister". There was a thinly concealed laugh when she spoke in her rough-hewn gravel voice. "Just a minor observation." Was all she replied. Her eyes watched as Fox drummed her claws on the table and her smile grew a little more. At least Fox wasn't scraping them over something like a chalkboard though she suspected if she pushed her any further that might be a course of action her Host would take to punish her for the comment.


See how much more robust you can make just a simple interaction? And by adding in extra details you give more for people to respond to. Keep in mind body language if you can't be beefy in your "verbal" responses.
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If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-03-2016, 06:16 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-03-2016, 08:23 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 01-04-2016, 04:24 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-04-2016, 05:05 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 01-04-2016, 08:21 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 01-04-2016, 10:06 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Sylvian - 01-04-2016, 10:16 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by DigiLord - 01-15-2016, 05:46 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-15-2016, 09:10 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by DigiLord - 01-15-2016, 09:13 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 01-15-2016, 03:28 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-15-2016, 11:51 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Sylvian - 01-16-2016, 02:42 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-16-2016, 05:41 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-16-2016, 08:01 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-16-2016, 11:08 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-16-2016, 06:31 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-16-2016, 06:59 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Sylvian - 01-16-2016, 07:32 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 01-18-2016, 01:13 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 01-18-2016, 02:48 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-18-2016, 05:27 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-18-2016, 06:18 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-18-2016, 07:21 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Jak W. Snow - 01-18-2016, 08:13 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-18-2016, 09:48 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 01-18-2016, 09:13 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 01-18-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 01-19-2016, 01:05 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 01-23-2016, 04:36 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-25-2016, 02:07 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-25-2016, 02:19 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 01-26-2016, 12:24 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 01-26-2016, 02:18 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 01-26-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 01-26-2016, 04:24 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-26-2016, 08:17 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Mr-Cynical - 01-27-2016, 01:33 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 01-27-2016, 01:56 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 01-27-2016, 05:33 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 01-27-2016, 05:16 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 02-03-2016, 02:19 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 02-03-2016, 07:46 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 02-04-2016, 12:32 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 02-04-2016, 07:43 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 02-05-2016, 08:01 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 02-04-2016, 08:30 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by DigiLord - 02-04-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 02-04-2016, 11:30 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by DigiLord - 02-05-2016, 12:52 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 04-03-2016, 03:28 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 04-04-2016, 12:53 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 04-09-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 04-09-2016, 01:42 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 04-10-2016, 01:58 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 04-14-2016, 05:49 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 04-14-2016, 06:19 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tigermark - 04-15-2016, 06:41 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 04-15-2016, 04:20 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 05-06-2016, 09:35 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-06-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Sylvian - 05-07-2016, 06:37 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 05-07-2016, 09:14 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-07-2016, 11:53 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 05-09-2016, 09:42 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-11-2016, 09:51 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-13-2016, 12:21 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 05-13-2016, 01:16 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 05-13-2016, 11:01 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 05-13-2016, 09:31 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 05-15-2016, 10:06 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 05-16-2016, 12:20 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-16-2016, 12:39 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 05-16-2016, 12:59 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 05-16-2016, 02:19 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-16-2016, 08:44 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 05-16-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 05-17-2016, 12:31 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 05-17-2016, 02:27 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 05-17-2016, 02:55 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-17-2016, 02:32 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 05-17-2016, 11:44 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 05-18-2016, 09:43 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 05-18-2016, 10:02 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 05-18-2016, 10:17 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 05-23-2016, 08:42 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by stavner - 05-23-2016, 03:19 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 05-23-2016, 05:44 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by tobi3B - 05-23-2016, 05:57 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 06-08-2016, 05:55 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-08-2016, 06:01 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 06-09-2016, 01:12 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-09-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 06-09-2016, 11:02 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-11-2016, 01:14 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 06-19-2016, 07:12 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 06-21-2016, 12:22 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 06-21-2016, 05:37 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 06-22-2016, 10:21 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 06-23-2016, 12:44 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-23-2016, 09:16 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 06-27-2016, 11:33 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by starknights - 06-24-2016, 09:03 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by tobi3B - 06-24-2016, 03:33 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-24-2016, 07:55 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by tobi3B - 06-25-2016, 07:14 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 06-27-2016, 09:47 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 09-10-2016, 06:45 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-10-2016, 07:09 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 09-10-2016, 07:32 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-10-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 09-10-2016, 07:55 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-10-2016, 08:29 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by HawkHunter35 - 09-14-2016, 08:17 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-14-2016, 08:35 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by PhiltheCorgi - 09-14-2016, 05:52 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Socks the Fox - 09-14-2016, 06:40 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-15-2016, 06:54 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by PhiltheCorgi - 09-15-2016, 12:54 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Gavyn - 09-15-2016, 04:23 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-15-2016, 05:28 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by PhiltheCorgi - 09-15-2016, 07:33 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 09-15-2016, 08:48 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-15-2016, 09:26 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 09-16-2016, 08:37 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 09-16-2016, 08:51 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-17-2016, 12:04 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 09-17-2016, 07:30 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 09-17-2016, 11:29 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-18-2016, 06:22 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 09-18-2016, 06:24 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 09-18-2016, 08:23 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Schemmer - 09-19-2016, 02:27 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 09-19-2016, 03:11 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Schemmer - 09-22-2016, 03:01 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 09-21-2016, 05:19 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Aralyn Thorn - 11-08-2016, 07:30 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 12-12-2016, 02:38 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 12-13-2016, 04:53 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 12-15-2016, 11:35 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 12-22-2016, 08:23 PM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Artemis - 12-23-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by TheSphinx - 12-27-2016, 11:10 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Tamara - 02-04-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Asyriel - 03-21-2017, 12:13 AM
RE: If you ever have questions - by Foxenawolf - 03-21-2017, 01:30 AM



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